Naito :: Custom Jutsu

[Methedor]

Name: Kireaji Kotsu No Jutsu :: Bone-edge
Rank: D
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Long
Element: None
Description: This jutsu uses the Kaguya's natural ability of bone manipulation to enhance thrown weapons. Bone is formed around the shuriken or other small weapon like kunai or fuma-shuriken, lining their edges with sharper bone given them the ability to pierce light metal armor and partly penetrate stone walls. Additionally the aerodynamics are enhanced to improve accuracy and enable guided shots, like curved flight paths.

Name: Hiryuu Kireaji Kotsu No Jutsu :: Flying Dragon Bone-edge
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Range: Long
Element: None
Description: This is an extension of the guiding principals of the Bone Edge jutsu applied to the shuriken and fuma-shuriken due to it being the only weapons of appropriate design. Like its predecessor, Kaguya manipulated bone is formed around the shuriken to increase it's sharpness, but as it is released a chakra connection is maintained allowing the aerodynamics to be altered mid flight allowing it to be steered as long as it has enough momentum and glide. It takes a great deal of concentration and control to keep a ranged link at Naito's level of training (Genin).

[Admin]

Make the element 'none' even though this are used by the kekkei genkai.

Next, are these meant to be personal jutsu or ones that are universal that other Kaguya member's could learn?

In the second one, make sure the description states that it uses the Kaguya's bone manipulation. And I'd say the second one is probably C-rank, in my opinion.

[Methedor]

They were intended as personal jutsu, however given the general application of the clan technique I think the Kireaji Kotsu No Jutsu :: Bone-edge should be general. I think it would make sense that while the clan seems focus in close combat (as it's jutsu tree implies) there would be range techs developed.

Though the second one, the Hiryuu Kireaji Kotsu No Jutsu :: Flying Dragon Bone-edge, is a personal one.

The second custom has benn reworded to "Like its predecessor, Kaguya manipulated bone is..."

[Admin]

Alright, then once these are approved the D-rank will go under the clan index page as a technique. You'll have to train for both of these, just remember that.

With your edits these look better

Admin Approval 1/2

[Methedor]

Yep, I have a post on standby for "D".

[gundamoutlaw]

2/2

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